I was just relaxing against a tree when my tummy started rumbling. At that moment I decided to go on a quest for bamboo. Since pandas are quite slow by the time I saw a glimpse of some, it was dark. I stumbled towards it and was about to take a big bite when glowing leaves surrounded me. I tried to touch one but it burnt my finger. Since I came for the food I grabbed some bamboo and headed for an exit but the leaves followed me. What is so special about the bamboo? Will I ever get out? TO BE CONTINUED...
By Amber T
I like how you were the panda.There were no mistakes that I could find.
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Hi Amber t I really like your story I like all the word like stumbled, rumbling, next time try to use more similes and wow word. By Sophie
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