Yellow dust brushed past while I was on my porch eating croissants. I noticed it floating into a beautiful bamboo forest at the end of my garden that hadn’t been there last night.
I had to explore. I stepped in and counted thirteen pandas having breakfast too. I wasn’t afraid of them but they noticed me and ran.
I tried to follow but they moved fast! I ran for hours but lost them. I saw light as the bamboo thinned and suddenly was standing in front of my neighbour Mrs Dingle, wearing only my boxers!
I turned to look back at the forest. All I saw was my garden gate.
By Sam Ctr
Great story
ReplyDeleteI like how you put pandas in your story and how you used describing words.
~Amber T
I really like the sentience I stepped in and counted thirteen pandas having breakfast too. My wish is for you next time put some interesting words instead of boring words.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Sam! I enjoyed reading your writing. :)
ReplyDeleteIt made me think that you were in a dream at times, especially the part about being in your boxers in front of your neighbour!
You held my attention until the end - I am now wondering where the forest went! An enjoyable piece - I will be submitting your story for the showcase.
Keep up the awesome work!
Miss Newman from BNMS Hamilton
Hi Sam I liked how you said floating bamboo forest. then your neighbour saw you in your boxers and the pandas.
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