This year I'm going to Australia. We first take a plane to Auckland and then take a plane from there. We land at Gold Coast and Stay there for seven days. Then we go down to Caloundra and stay there for seven days. The hotel we stay at has a view of the sea a gaming room, pool and sauna. The place we stay at in Caloundra looks like a Mexican house with a pool. The thing I'm looking forward to doing is to go to sea world and have fun at the beach.
By Sam Cur
You expand on this you just saying then were going to do this then were going to do that. Its not very exciting. Next time try describing things more also there a few punctuation errors.
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