What is this place? I wondered as I walked through a bamboo forest. It was just yesterday that I ran away from the horrible orphanage. When I ran away I ran and ran until I came to a little cave that I took shelter in. I explored, and I found an opening that led me to this forest. Suddenly, just as it the sun started to set, a rustling sound started coming from the ground, and then golden flakes started to rise up from the ground. I did not know if this was a dangerous forest but no one was going to make me come out. Especially not to go back to the orphanage.
By Luke
Make sure you don't rush your writing take time to proof read.
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I like how you used orphanage, suddenly, rustled because they are good words.
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