Boom, shots ricochet off of the buildings next to the bamboo forest. “Run” yells someone behind me, everyone scatters for cover, I run into the forest where autumn leaves paint the ground yellow and red.
I have been running for about twenty minutes and I’m deep in the woods, suddenly the leaves are illuminated by a strange light from above, they start rising of of the ground and slowly start spinning round in circles like a mini tornado. I look up towards the sky and see a large circular object hovering about twenty meters above my head. Is it a UFO?
By Danny
It was a really good story but next time try not to put the same word next to each other, for example you wrote they start rising of of the ground.
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Illuminated is a good word, a mini tornado is a good describing word and I love the story and I have no wishes for you the story is great
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