Once apon a time, I flewed a plane for about 4 hours to London. After we landed we went in a bus and i said can we go to that awesome forest in London and then we had a look and we saw all the leaves and all the trees and the bush. What did I do there was i had a look and looked at some branches and a river and some banks There was some dangerous areas around there like the river that you fall in straight like two metres fall into the river.Also in danger for fun is there can be some wolfs, some lions and tigers and quite a few birds but all the tigers and lions catch the birds which is not good. But also we like hanged around the forest... for two hours looking around and then after we went for lunch at a restaurant near BigBen
By Ryan
This is a really good piece of writing Ryan, I can see that you have tried really hard with this. Remember, YOU ARE IMPORTANT, so you need to use a capital letter for (i) e.g. after we landed, we went in a bus and I said......
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