the mist
Across the street next to the devils statue . Lies a creepy old forest that no one ever entered.
It once had a little cottage with 2 Jenny age 27 and Lyncon age 44 they were peaceful unto
The sole of the past owner the bone keeper who was a psychopath killer came and lit the house alight. It killed everyone it the house and the smoke glooms around forever and will never go away. Now every half moon the forest trees will release a toxic yellow mist created by the smoke and anything that goes into it will die
By Connor
I really like the start it gives it a good hook. But in the middle part you forgot some full stops because you have only a small amount of full stops in it.
ReplyDeleteit had enough full stops
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