I walked towards the forest my thoughts in a constant battle. I tried to block out all the voices but couldn’t help but listen. What if someone sees you? Is this really a good idea? No one will miss you. All these different voices swirled around in my head making me dizzy and my breathing unsteady. In frustration I sprinted into the forest, tears rolling down my face.
I don’t know how long I’d been running but when I stopped my legs gave way and I fell to the ground. I turned over onto my back and tried to make out where I was, but nothing was clear. I could only see the faint shapes of the bamboo stalks. As the world began to fade into darkness I saw small yellow lights. They danced around me and in that moment I was finally happy.
By Ruby
That was a really good story but next time maybe add more intense words Kynan
ReplyDeleteI love the start of your story because it was interesting and it make me want to read more. I also love your great words like unsteady, frustration and faint.
ReplyDeleteI like your sentence starter because it made me want to read more I liked the words constant and battle .
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