One dark and gloomy night Amber and I were walking down the streets to go shopping. When all of a sudden we heard a noise, it sounded like someone screaming so we went to check it out. The noise took us to a forest full of people. They were having a party so we thought that's what the sound must be so we carried on walking. A couple of minutes later we got closer into the forest and that's when we saw it. To be continued…
By Amber N
Hi Amber ,I really liked your story because you used describing word (dark,gloomy ) I also like how you started your story because it really hooked me in .
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