Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Week 2 - Frozen yogurt !!! by Amber N

“ Hey Tiffany are we going to go to the movies this weekend.”
Said Serra cheerfully.
“Hey Serra yes we are and we are also going to get frozen yogurt as well if that's alright.”
“Ya that's all right but how will I know the price of frozen yogurt.”
“I've been there before I know the price.”
“Ya but how will I know the price I can't read minds.”
Serra said confused.
“Because I will tell you.”
“Ya but how will I know.”
Serra said still confused.
“Never mind let's not go.”

Tiffany said in an annoyed voice.

By Amber N

2 comments:

  1. I really like how you used speech the whole time it created a great effect! A great use of the prompt and 100 words!

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  2. Hi Amber N i love your story because you wrote as if it was an chat or argument . You also use a range of puncuation .

    from Ashley

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