I was at Scouts and we were playing hide and seek, I ran off in my own direction and found the best hiding place ever, it was behind this old run down caravan.
20 minutes went by and I was still not found, then I the person that was in, I stood as still as possible. But he was coming towards me. How has he found me? Then he said “found you.” Was he talking to me or someone else? I stood completely still, hardly breathing. But he said it again. “I've found you came out.” So I got up and said.”how did you find me?” “I didn’t. I found Emma” I looked behind me and saw Emma smiling. “Oh well how was I supposed to know.” I said.
By Jasmine
What do you mean in the sentence: 'then I the person that was in'?
ReplyDelete~ Ryan B
I really like your story Jasmine. Great use of the prompt! I like the part where you wrote - I stood completely still, hardly breathing. It had a great affect on the reader. Overall I thought your story was interesting and descriptive. A great use of 100 words!
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