David walked down the broken path leading to the old church; maybe he could get some peace and quiet in there. As he made his way up to the large mahogany doors he couldn’t shake the feeling that he was being watched. He turned around quickly to see if his suspicions were right but when he turned around he saw no one. He quickly walked into the church not wanting to stay out there any longer then he had to. Inside, the church was cold and damp; it was hard to imagine that this was a place of hope and happiness. But how would he know about hope and happiness?
By Ruby
Very good story. I liked how you used lots of emotions. By Kynan
ReplyDeleteWell done Ruby! Your story really engaged it and I really wanted to keep reading! A great use of the prompt and 100 words!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story because of your great wow words like damp, happiness, suspicious and quickly.
ReplyDeleteCaitlin