Once upon a time in a land far, far away in Libbleton there was a boy named John Sorrow. He had a dream of becoming a wizard like the famous wizard Oz TryHanko who was a magic wizard who could do all types of tricks. Like pulling a monkey out of his hat just from saying wickaKakadu. I know it's pretty amazing to watch and John had always wanted to go to his magic show but could never afford to as at the hundred and something dollars you have to be rich to afford something like that.
One day Oz opened a wizard school and there was a competition. In the competition you have to show how much you want to go to the school, so you had to write a letter. John spent all night thinking about what he was going to write but then it came to him that he knew what he was going to write about. He was going to write about how much he wanted to get into the school. Silly John, he should have just thought about it in the first place that's what it said on the poster.
The day after John sent it in Wizard box which is a fast way of getting your mail to the wizard that you want to give it to. A week later John got a reply from his letter that he sent to Oz TryHanko. Opening the letter he did not know what to say to his parents as it was a dream come true.
The end of chapter one of the Wizard school.
By Tyler
tyler that is really cool keep doing these long words you will come a pro
ReplyDeleteWell done this had a really good hook and I enjoy it. but keep it 100 words if you can.
ReplyDeleteHey Tyler,
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. Although it was quite hard to follow, everything seemed to happen at once.
Also I believe that this was not 100 words. My mistake if you had to do more than 100 words.
Great plot though and I hope you do more chapters,
Kane