The bike race had begun, My feet were peddling as fast as i could, my heart was pounding as i rode up the steep hill. I got to the top of the hill, exhausted, i started going down the other side and saw a man just get off the track leaving something behind as he left. Later i came around a tight corner i saw him again leave something behind as he got off the track. Finally i could see the finish line. I ran over a detonator the BOOOOOOOM! Explosions fired breaking the track open as bikes plummeted into the ground this race spun into chaos.
By Matthew
Hi Matthew your story was really good but I got a bit lost in the middle of it and you need to remember to have capital I's.
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nice Matthew i like when
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I love you story and like this put The bike race had begun, My feet were peddling as fast as i could, my heart was pounding as i rode up the steep hill. I got to
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