Bob and rose was having trouble to get up the mountain. Because it was windy.....he fell on the snow.
She felt scared. She didn't what to do ?. Two minutes later the helicopter arrived to help and next minute
he popped out of the snow.
By Olivia
Great wok Olivia for using short and long sentences. It makes your writing interesting.
ReplyDeleteChallenge:
Read your work out loud to see if there are any missing words. Don't forget a capital for Rose's name.
Allana - Teacher from New Zealand, 5SC, http://waka-stride.blogspot.co.nz/