In the middle of the
morning two men hoped into their airplane . The plane was called x marks the
spot. The men were adventurers exploring
all over the world. Off they went in their
big airplane. About halfway to their
destination they flew into a storm. Not just any kind of storm it was a
cyclone. They started going out of
control, suddenly a bolt of lighting struck the planes wing. They started going
down into the sea. Just in time the tall men grabbed their parachutes and
jumped out of the plane. The men landed
safely and the plane crashed in the sea.
By Blake
Hello Blake,
ReplyDeleteWell done for entering the 100 Word Challenge. What an imaginative use of the prompt, I hadn't considered it could be a name...what a good idea.
I enjoyed the way you managed to fit so much story into your 100 words. You really have lots of action.. have you thought of using different punctuation to give your words greater impact? a good explanation mark or ellipses can really increase the tension.
You should be very proud of your writing, keep up the good work.
Ms Woodgate (Team 100wc) Maidstone, Kent. UK