"Rawgh" growled bob the LION as he tripped over a tiny, shiny CORNFLAKE and landed on a brown, leather DRUM. He quickly stumbles to his feet before any of the other zoo animals saw his clumsiness.Who would be so careless to drop a cornflake into a creatures cage?!Bob was answered by a sharp jab in his hoove. He looked down a spotted a suspicious cornflake trail leading to the exit of the zoo.Curiously, bob galloped along the trail, DANCING with EXCITMENT, untill finally he reached a dark and gloomy room... Cautiously bob trotted around and around the trail that seamed to lead to a dark and spooky cornerand then all of a sudden it stops. Bob suddenly felt a pair of claws smash onto his side with a jolt and bob suddenly realised that he had been led into a trap...
By Zena
i liked your story and next time try to make your words bigger
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