I woke up this morning bright and early, ready for a big day ahead. I got out of bed, got dressed and ran downstairs to eat my cornflakes.Once mum was ready, we were off. It was so exciting, we were going to the Circus . Mum brought me some popcorn and candyfloss and we went to our seats.Then there was a drum roll and the curtains opened. The circus had begun. Wow, it’s amazing! There were clowns , acrobats , a man who put his head in a lions mouth and my favourite, a bear that danced. It was a day I will never forget.
By Ruby
Hello Ruby,
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