Katie peered at the tattered old message discreetly.
The ink was smudged, and the paper had turned yellow but she could just see it
was a very old treasure map. Suddenly she saw that some of the map had become
visible, the part of the map that the sun was shining over. She dashed outside
so she could see the words on the paper more clearly. She followed a long and
frustrating track to which would lead her to the treasure, something shining
brightly caught her eye she was too puffed to move X MARKS THE SPOT she breathed slowly
By Anna
Aloha Anna!
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I love your use of detail to paint the picture in my mind!
Keep up the great writing!
Ms. Kelly 100 WC Team