Wednesday, April 22, 2015

Anna - the map

Katie peered at the tattered old message discreetly. The ink was smudged, and the paper had turned yellow but she could just see it was a very old treasure map. Suddenly she saw that some of the map had become visible, the part of the map that the sun was shining over. She dashed outside so she could see the words on the paper more clearly. She followed a long and frustrating track to which would lead her to the treasure, something shining brightly caught her eye she was too puffed to move  X MARKS THE SPOT she breathed slowly

By Anna


1 comment:

  1. Aloha Anna!
    Great story! I love your use of detail to paint the picture in my mind!
    Keep up the great writing!
    Ms. Kelly 100 WC Team

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