It was a cold windy day I saw a leaf dance along the room. Then my mum shouted “breakfast time”! Whats is for breakfast? cornflakes? Not again! Then my brother roared like a lion and said “I will make pancakes mum!” How exciting! I love pancakes especially with cream, maple syrip and jam. I stomped down the stairs like a drum. Now I was ready for school. I hopped on my bike and sped off. If I didn't have those pancakes I wouldn't of had the energy to get to school as fast as I did. Once I got to school I put my bike in the bike cage and went to class.
By Dom
Cool story Dom. I like they way you said "Then my brother roared like a lion".Next time when you go on to talking about something else make a new paragraph
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