One
sunny afternoon I started walking down the footpath. I stumbled across a lion, he was a strange colour.
He looked like a cornflake,
with his mane around his face. I
couldn’t believe my eyes, the lion began to break dance. The tiger was sitting in the corner playing
the drum. The cheetah had already danced first, and the elephant was
begging for his turn. There was
something odd about them. Upon closer
inspection I realized they were people in costumes. Further up the path, I saw a sign it said
welcome to the zoo! . It as so exciting, I jumped up and down on the
spot.
By
Blake
Well done some well chosen descriptions. You need to make sure that you have read through your work to check that it makes sense. Well done for entering the 100wc, keep up the good work.
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