Wednesday, April 22, 2015

Ashley - Finding the restaurant

One day some people decided to go to dinner at the most famous restaurant but they didn’t know where it was. So they looked for the restaurant on a map. When they found the place they said “X marks the spot.”  So off they went following the points on the map to their dinner. As they traveled they found and saw some really cool stuff from the 1980’s.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 5, 2015 at 10:37 AM

    Aloha Ashley!
    I like your story line, especially the 1980s reference! I would be helpful to include more CSDs (concrete sensory details) to help tell your stories.
    Keep writing! Ms. Kelly 100 WC Team

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  2. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 4:21 PM

    ha so funny!Use more descriptive writing. And I loved how you included 1980's.
    As the Robinson's say keep moving forward.
    by Olivia

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