As I walk into the great hall with a long ceiling and a big fire place in the centre. I go to look at the picture on the wall. I don't know why but my mind just wanted to wonder around, but something was odd about that picture. As I looked closer I noticed what was weird about the picture. I run outside the great hall and rush to my friends. We all dash to the great hall and surround the picture. The picture was a photo of a man but it was actually a map and there was a x and x marks the spot.
By Alyssa
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ReplyDeleteHi Alyssa, thank you for your entry this week, I enjoyed reading it. I was curious as to where the great hall might be. Make sure you read over your work as it didn't quite flow, or maybe ask a friend to read it for you but keep going.
Thanks
Mrs Skinner (Team 100)
I enjoyed your story, Alyssa.
ReplyDeleteIt is curious how a picture of one thing, a man, can look like a map too.
You have used some good words to describe your excitement like 'rush' and 'dash'.
Well done and keep writing for 100WC!