I
sat devouring my cornflakes. It was so exciting, I was going to see our brand new bach
for the very first time! We drove a tedious long drive to our bach. When we
arrived we darted up the elegant, pink rose framed, driveway. We rushed into
the house and ran out onto the patio. I was awestruck by the sensational beauty
of the scintillating dazzling dark blue sea. Then I saw something fascinating,
a circus with no roof! There was a fiery orange lion
who was dancing on a tightrope, and an
elephant playing the drum! I was blown-away!
By
Anna
Great work Anna.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used various ranges of descriptive words such as scintillating and awestruck.