Wednesday, April 29, 2015

Anna

I sat devouring my cornflakes. It was so exciting, I was going to see our brand new bach for the very first time! We drove a tedious long drive to our bach. When we arrived we darted up the elegant, pink rose framed, driveway. We rushed into the house and ran out onto the patio. I was awestruck by the sensational beauty of the scintillating dazzling dark blue sea. Then I saw something fascinating, a circus with no roof! There was a fiery orange lion who was dancing on a tightrope, and an elephant playing the drum! I was blown-away!


By Anna 

1 comment:

  1. Great work Anna.
    I love how you used various ranges of descriptive words such as scintillating and awestruck.

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