As I stood with the gun in my left hand that I had killed a girl that I did not know with.I could hear screaming and crying from the public and members who new her.
As I looked at her pale skin I started to cry.
I knew what I had done. I had killed someone and I had committed crime. and now I am going to be sent to jail for the rest of my life.
Then I could hear sirens of the cop cars coming,I feeled like running but it's too late I did not bugge.
By Ava
I loved your story Ava,because it had a lot of information and detail I liked how you said as I looked at her pale skinI started to cry.But you are missing a capital letter when you said ad now.
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i like your story. the bit were you killed a girl
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