Cass
knew it was only a matter of time before her vibrant red hair, dyed to match
her vivid jacket, attracted the pooping giant. Frantically, she threw bird seed
at the humungous bird. The bird edged closer and closer to her, with its
razor-sharp claws extended. Cass feared she might never again see her Lego
house, made and designed specially by Ed Sheeran. Unable to move (she was after
all only a Lego character), she wished her friend Barbie would swing by in her
pink corvette to save her. The pooping giant opened its colossal beak about to
gulp down Cass when…
By Anna
Sawyer
Great work Anna!
ReplyDeleteAs always I love your use of descriptive words, and how you used them.
nice descriptive word next time try and get a better title
ReplyDeleteReally discptitive writing and humour
ReplyDeletefrom jet
it is a great story with great description, and you left us hanging. There has to be more :)
ReplyDeleteby fynn
Awesome story. I like how you used exciting adjectives!
ReplyDeleteFrom Alyssa.c
Great story, I feel sorry for Cass
ReplyDeleteRiley
nice story good use of describing words
ReplyDeleteby jordan