Once upon a time their was six big wolfs.There names were Porky,Pork Pork,Po,Paddington and Piggy.Then there was a little tiny pig.The pig look like it just came out of a sewage pipe.Then one day the six big wolfs made a home.It was made out of stone they mine with the pickaxes they made.Then they heard something in the woods.It was scary and all the leaves started to vanish off the trees. It was the little fart pig and it did a gigantic fart and smash the six big wolfs house.
By Jet-Li
great story jet-li nice ideas
ReplyDeletegreat story jet-li nice ideas
ReplyDeleteGood story i just love the names of the pigs,but next time do more commas then fullstops.
ReplyDeleteFrom Tylar
Good story next time don't repeat the same word two times
ReplyDeleteFrom Adam
good story jet-li. I like how you said It was the little fart pig and it did a gigantic fart and smash the six big wolfs house. next time you can put more wow words.
ReplyDeleteby alex ( valley school )