As I woke up I could smell the fresh morning breeze, I could feel the drift of the wind coming from my open window. I jumped out of bed I could see my beautiful ballerina sitting on my white draws. I race to my door, opened it, and to my surprise there was a little blue box wrapped in pink ribbon. On it, it said OPEN, as I lifted the lid I could smell something new there was a beautiful necklace sitting in the box with a gold plate on it saying anabell from your family the livingstons. I could have said that was the best b-day present ever.
By Maddison
I like the first sentence, and I also like the last sentence too. :-]
ReplyDeleteFrom: Janke', Valley School, Pukekohe :-]