Prince
Handsome was walking through the forest one day when he heard a girl singing. The
sound was coming from a majestic castle. At the top was a girl with long blonde
hair. He asked what her name was, “Rapunzel” replied a soft voice. He called “Rapunzel
let down your hair.” Luxurious golden locks cascaded down like a fountain. The
prince started to climb, when suddenly Rapunzel, who had leaned out too far, came
hurtling down head first onto a slimy green frog. Head injuries resulted in her
falling in love with the frog, which leads me onto another tale…
By Anna
Anna well done, i really like your topic on Rapunzel, can't wait to hear the next story.
ReplyDeletegreat story anna very funny maybe put some more bigger words
ReplyDeletefroom luke rm11
Nice work Anna I thought you had great descriptive language and also just keep going how your going.
ReplyDeleteby Ben Mercer
That was awesome Anna! I love how you connected two different fairytales together! I have nothing negative to say about it! 10/10 for creativity! By Zena!
ReplyDeleteHaha Anna very funny I like the way you all most went into another story.Not much to improve on just keep doing what your doing your writing is really cool.
ReplyDeleteBy Sam
ReplyDeleteLOLThat was so funny.I like how you had a great use of languge!
keep going.
olivia vrevaart
Great story Anna! great job on making a fairy tale funny, it really made me laugh out loud! I loved when you said "Luxurious golden locks cascaded down like a fountain"
ReplyDeleteGood job Anna I really like your story. It is so funny.
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