Once upon a time, there was a flood in Lego land.
It killed 45% of the Lego people! And even more just from starvation. But I knew that I couldn’t let any more die. I was so worried about my family and the other Lego people from Lego town, so I decided to go and search for food. I travelled a long way! Until finally I came to an extremely tall tree. I climbed up and up until I reached the top! And at the top, was a HUGE pile of food! But there was one problem, there was a massive eagle guarding it. So I was left a decision: Risk my life to get the food supply or retreat and leave my city to starve…
WOW ZENA!!! YOU ARE AMAZING!!!
ReplyDeleteThis story is really good. I like how you have left it to the final decision.
ReplyDeletei liked how you started of ur story next time try and use descriptive words
ReplyDeletehaha nice face at the end great great words
ReplyDeletefrom luke rm 11
This story is really good. I like how you have left it to the final decision.
ReplyDeleteOMG, i love it , i hope you keep writing amazing story's.
ReplyDeleteOh my god... what will the person choose. great cliffhanger :)
ReplyDeleteby fynn
I like how you put your self into the story and I hope you keep doing what your doing.
ReplyDeletefrom Ashley
I like your descriptive writing by Dom
ReplyDeleteGreat story Zena! you've left me really intrigued with your cliff-hanger I wonder what your going to choose!
ReplyDelete~Anna Sawyer