One day, Whilst Ella was strolling through the village; she stopped and thought, she knew that eventually she would attract the monumental beast.
Her fiery red hair darted behind her as she ambled her way over to the grocery store. But..
A dreary shadow tumbled down in-front of Ella.
She edged her way to face what was her Deepest fear.
Scattered in front of her were old bird seeds which were undoubtedly from the beast.
Ella stood awe-struck alone in the empty village.
She brainstormed in her head what she was going to do.
Until it happened…
By Caitlin.
Wednesday, May 13, 2015
Caitlin - Shadows
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She is thinking about her deepest fear and then she goes to the grocery shop??
ReplyDeleteApart from that good story, LOVE IT!!
Fantastic Caitlin, great language (ambled, monumental and awe-struck). Great use of punctuation and creation of suspense. The strangest things can happen on the way to the shops. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMs McGrath, Team 100, Australia