My hart pounds with fare as I come face to face with this giant creature. Its broad body and pointy sward like claws, are threatening to someone as small as me. As take one step closer to this terrifying creature I stumble on a large seed. Then suddenly the bird’s huge eye comes closer to me, popping my comfort zone. Its dark eye reflects its soul which is egger to eat me… or am I wrong as I stand on the tree stump, I realize something. The bird was only there for the seeds! This bird is now nice.
By Chavawn
Nice story Chavawn! You used lots of descriptive language ,next time could you please make your font a bit bigger.
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