Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Luke - Lego Ruby frost


One fine morning ruby frost was singing. Soon after she was interrupted by a big ugly looking bird, called Justin Bieber he said “man your singing bad” Ruby was like no I’m not and stared playing her guitar. After that Justin took her guitar and smashed it on wood like there was on tomorrow. Soon after that Rugby said “ Im leaving” and off she went. Then Justin said, “I’m coming with u,”. Then rugby said, “come on then” and off they went in to the distance far far far away. done done darn 

By Luke

2 comments:

  1. LOVELY!! but make sure it makes sense.

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  2. Hello

    Mrs H from team 100 here in UK.

    This is a fun and very imaginative response to the prompt. It made me laugh! Well done.
    Remember to check over your writing for missing capital letters and punctuation and it will be even better.
    Keep up the good writing.

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