Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Erana - Jeff

As lucy the red head reached out to feed the humungas brown eagle, she realised she was just a tiny lego person with her least favourite rose red clothes.
Lucy got afraid when she saw the eagle cause it could kill her in an instant.
Months past and Lucy still feed the eagle she finally named Jeff.
one day Lucy couldn't get any food for Jeff which means she might die today.
You see Jeff and Lucy have this deal, the deal is that Lucy brings Jeff some food and in return Jeff try to help Lucy get out of her house and back to her family.

Lucy walked out of her house with nothing in her hand and Jeff had a angry look on his face...

By Erana

3 comments:

  1. Erana, the bird sounds terrifying in your story. I wonder what he will do to poor Lucy now that she is unable to feed him. Remember that names always require a capital letter.
    Miss Scott (Team 100WC)

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  2. Lynda (Team 100WC) from HartlepoolMay 18, 2015 at 4:13 AM

    Oh-oh....poor Lucy. I wonder if she became Jeff's dinner? I liked this story (although I found it difficult to read with that font and the fact that you also centred the text. It made it difficult for the words to flow.)
    You used the photo prompt really well but I can't help wondering how long she would have to keep feeding him before he finally showed her the way home. I think he might have just been tricking her. Very well done for taking part this week.

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  3. THAT WAS REALY SCARY IM ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR JEFF IS A MEAN BIRD. NEXT TIME ADD COMMAS AND CHEECK YOUR SPELLING- CHAVAWN XXX.

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