Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Luke - The Dog Prince

One fine evening a young princess put on her bonnet and clogs and went to take a walk by herself in the woods. When she came to a cool spring of water with a rose in the middle of it she sat her self down. Then a frog came out. The  frog said" If you kiss me you will turn in to whatever you want “. So the prince asked to be a cat and kissed him but the spell didn’t work and turned him  into a dog and they lived happily every after.   

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 7, 2015 at 3:01 PM

    Funny story i like the twist you added to it!


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  2. UnknownMay 9, 2015 at 9:40 PM

    I like the way you describe her wearing "bonnet and clogs" as this immediately tells us that the setting of the story is in the time past. When you say "the prince asked ..." did you mean princess? I got a bit confused.

    I like the use of humor in this too. Well done
    Mrs Taynton team 100wc
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