I was walking to my friends house in the rain. And a tornado siren went off, and the noise was deafening. So I ran as fast as I could to my friends house. When I got there we went down to the basement, while the tornado was passing. When we got back up half of the house was gone. Emergency services were everywhere. I quickly run to my house to see if my mum and dad were ok. But when I got there the whole house was destroyed. And then this basement door opened and my family came out.
By Adam
Nice story but you only made 3 describing words. Deafening, quickly and destroyed. I liked your simile. Keep it up. Your doing better and better Every week. From Brayden valley school. 😃😃😃
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