As the sun come out the ray burns on my eyes and makes me blind so Can't see so I have to go to the hospital but they can do nothing about it. So they told me to go lie down on the couch but the sun was shining there but he forces me to sit down there another ray of light comes and shine sin my eyes and it burns. but they can still do nothing about it. suddenly I fell on the floor and the doctor didn't even know. Did I die or did I survive.
By Luke
some of your story doesn't make sense cause of the grammar.
ReplyDeletei really liked the ending.
fynn