I have nine brothers and 4 sisters. They all love to shout and scream and talk really loudly. But you think that’s bad. They all have there birthday on the same day and its horrible. Every year it’s the same they get out of bed and wake me up with horrible noises. ‘It’s our birthday’! They shout. It’s such a horrible sound! But this year it was the worst it’s ever been. I woke up with the sound of all thirteen of them stamping and shouting. But they weren’t cheering for themselves they were cheering to me!
By Chavawn
That Was Weird...It's a great story,I liked how you used It's Such a horrible sound!, maybe next time You can use some similes,
ReplyDeleteJordyn