ALL OF THE CHOCOLATE IN THE WORLD SITTING IN FRONT OF MY EYES.IT’S AS IF I CAN HEAR IT TALLKING TO ME. (EAT ME, EAT ME). ALL I CAN DO IS STAND THERE LOOKING AT ALL THAT CHOCOLATE. THERE’S MILK CHOCOLATE, WHITE CHOCOLATE, DARK CHOCOLATE AND MORE. BUT THE BUNNY IS JUST GOING TO GIVE IT AWAY TO GOOD KIDS. EVEN THOUGH THE EASTER BUNNY COULD JUST GIVE IT ALL TO ME IT GIVES IT TO THEM? I NEVER GET CHOCOLATE. BUT I GUESS THAT’S OK. BECAUSE I HAVE MY FAMILY AND MY FAMILY IS ALL I NEED.
By Chavawn
Hi Chavawn,
ReplyDeleteI love the end sentence, "Because I have my family and my family is all I need" I like how you used all capitals for impact, but maybe next time use only the capitals in the most important bits. Other wise love this story, your a great writer, keep it up!
Good story. just tallking is spelt talking and work on your capitals other then that nice story:)
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