One day after work I went on my computer and started watching a movie. Then I thought that movie was short then I start watching a movie then I went to bed as the sun came out. I got up but it was 1:00 in the morning so I went back to bed then I woke up at 6:00 then I realised I was late to work so I got in the car and rushed to work. When I got there the boss said I was late again then he said I had the day of tomorrow I was happy.
By Madison
Hey Madison, cool story I like the way you wrote it. Next time add some commas and use a different word from (then). Keep it up:)
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