As the sun came out the fish came out and as the fish came out the fishermen came out. And cam was fortunately one of the fishermen. One fisherman that just came in on a boat said that there was a bull shark tallying his boat. So cam told the rest of the guys and girl so most of them got out there big hooks and bait and so did cam. Cam saw a dorsal fin pop up about 100 metres away so he quickly threw the bait out. He waited and waited and waited, but one of the other fishermen caught the shark.
By Jordan
I liked your story Jordan and you discribed the story well, just remember though that you have to have capital letters for names.
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