Boom, Crash, thud. The neighbours must be having a ball over there, a wild party perhaps, I think to myself. You could hear yelling, screaming, people setting off fireworks and lots of other stuff, the noise was deafening. It got so bad that my cat rung the neighbours to asked them to be quiet, I know MY CAT??!?!?! But yeah anyway they finally settle down and I can get the sleep i want and NEED, BUT WAIT they turned up the music “well thanks” I yell out the window but no one heard me. Looks like this is going to be an all nighter.
By Maddison
Hi Maddison
ReplyDeleteI really like your story. I like the bit when you shouted I know MY CAT??!?!?!
Keep up the great work.
Janke' Valley School Pukekohe
Hey Maddison
ReplyDeleteI love your story. I like the descriptive words you had. Your cat really lol!
Maegan- Otautau
Also work on adding a simile or metaphor.
ReplyDeleteBut great work though.
Maegan- Otautau