10 minutes to go in the rugby world cup New zealand vs Australia. Australia is up 3-0 it looks dark for the All blacks. 5 minutes to go now we've lost all hope but then a turn over, the All blacks are pushing Australia back at the half the 10 and then the 22. It's 2 minutes and then Australia get a turn over they pass it through there back line then an intercept by Richie McCaw he's gonna go all the way HE SCORES!!!! New zealand wins the crowd goes wild the noise was deafening.
By Sam
Great story! I liked how Richie got the intercept. Maybe next time, you could put commas in some places.
ReplyDeleteFrom James, Otautau
I liked the descriptive writing I was really hocked.
ReplyDeleteI did not understand the bit when you said (back the half of 10)
Wow! Very interesting you must be a good commentater on rugby. There is nothing I would change. You have tried to work hard on this story.
ReplyDeleteSam Valley School.
i like the story sam
ReplyDeletegreat commentating sam
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