As the sun came up i rubbed my eyes, I quickly jumped up and got dressed thinking i cant wait to go to the beach today and try out Granddads Contiki fishing thing. hoping that everyone else was up and getting ready to go, I had my breakfast and made sure my togs and towel were in my bag. Everyone else was up and ready too. Off we went to Rabbit Island, it was amazing out there that early in the morning. We had the best time fishing and we caught 3 snapper and lots of seaweed. I love Rabbit Island.
By Brooklynn
Hi brooklynn, something to work on would be to add some describing words to add my impact to your stories. I like your start as many can relate to that. Keep it up:)
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