We were walking on the beach it was about 5am. He sat his phone on a log and played my favorite song and asked me for this dance and of course I said yes. Omg looking into his eyes made me feel like I was dreaming. After the dance we sat down on the old broken log and talked and talked and talked then the sun came up it shone upon the still water and made the sand sparkle I felt like it was a dream, ”beep,beep,beep”goes my alarm only if it wasn't a dream...
By Maddison
I really liked you story you made it descripted and had a twist on the end, although next time re read your story to make sure it makes sense.
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