Sam was wondering around in the mall and looking at clothes and games and other stuff. And the mall immediately went into lockdown. And people were saying that there was a man with a gun outside so Sam went to see it for himself and Sam was looking out every window or something he could see through .after a little while he did see it for himself close up very close up and Sam was captured. About 10 20 minutes later the cops came and Sam was dragged to a van but the guy with the gun but he was shot and the sound was defining.
By Jordan
there is alot of ands in your story I like how u said sam was captured maybe you could ad some speech but good story any way
ReplyDeleteNice story bro. The start was very good I wanted to read more of it.Lucky the guy was shot, other wise Sam was gonna die. Keep it up. :) P.S i didint get the last sentence from matthew
ReplyDeleteNice story bro. The start was very good I wanted to read more of it.Lucky the guy was shot, other wise Sam was gonna die. Keep it up. :) P.S i didint get the last sentence from matthew
ReplyDeleteI love the story. Great idea for the topic
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