my eyes widen as the sun came out it looked so beautiful so I speed over to my camera to take a stunning photograph.
"Are you ready for school" mum yells from the end of the hall.
I reply "coming mum. did you see the sunrise this morning it was amazing"
"yes darling now lets go"
We both get in the brand new black jeep and drive of to school.
By Erana
I liked your story you discribed the sunrise well, just remeber to add pun action like question marks where it's needed.
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