Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Erana - As the sun came out

My sparkly green eyes shoot open after a long night sleep, I rush out of bed to pull my silk pink curtains hoping to not miss the beautiful sunrise.
my eyes widen as the sun came out it looked so beautiful so I speed over to my camera to take a stunning photograph.
"Are you ready for school" mum yells from the end of the hall.
I reply "coming mum. did you see the sunrise this morning it was amazing"
"yes darling now lets go"
We both get in the brand new black jeep and drive of to school.
By Erana

1 comment:

  1. I liked your story you discribed the sunrise well, just remeber to add pun action like question marks where it's needed.
    From Alyssa.C

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