My heart jumps a mile, my teeth grind, my eyes go big, I suddenly go hungry inside.
And as my mouth starts to water, I can't resist the temptation to go inside the shop.
A sweet smell wafts around my noise as I enter. When I look up, I start to tremble because I'm looking at so much CHOCOLATE!!! My hands start to fidget, I'm so eager to get my hands on the chocolate. So, I leap at the the shelves, clawing at the candy, shoving it into my mouth. Even though I got kicked out, it was worth it.
And as my mouth starts to water, I can't resist the temptation to go inside the shop.
A sweet smell wafts around my noise as I enter. When I look up, I start to tremble because I'm looking at so much CHOCOLATE!!! My hands start to fidget, I'm so eager to get my hands on the chocolate. So, I leap at the the shelves, clawing at the candy, shoving it into my mouth. Even though I got kicked out, it was worth it.
By Kaitlyn
I love your story, you used good describing words.
ReplyDeleteRuby
Very funny! I always love to read your storys, you are such a great writer.
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