It was a dark stormy night and I could hear the raindrops on the roof as I tried to get to sleep, The noise was deafening. I got out of bed to get a drink of ice cold water and there was a crack of noisy thunder. It scared me so much. Startled by the noise, I spilled the water, slipped on the water and banged my head. I staggered back to my room fell on my bed and tried to get back to sleep. But the noise kept going, the rain, thunder and lightning.
By Riley
I like this story because this time you have read it and I liked that word staggered and this was a funny sentence I spilled the water then slipped over. Keep up the good work :)
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