Chocolate
Oh why thankyou you’re so kind and it is all mine yes all yours my love do you
want to go to the ball with me oh well ye but before I can finish my sentence
my alarm goes off wake up sleeping beauty you have work to do fine don’t you
use that voice with me yes step mother.
Ohm
Looking at all that chocolate is making me hungry. Mother you mean step mother
oh right may i have some chocolate no work food later but no buts now be nice
your no food at all ok now work.
By Sarah
Well done Sarah!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you blended a fairytale with your homework this week!
Next time work on your punctuation.
Well done, from Zena! :)
Good story Sarah
ReplyDeleteNext time can you use some punctuation and when there is someone talking start a new line but other from that it was a good story
From Taylah Otautau School
wow Sarah must say love your new work by Nadia at grey main p.s we all miss you a lot.
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